Okay, this one's brand new, and loosely based on experience:
Today-my very first day
In a world unknown;
The flag-off of my foray
Into a life alone.
Foreboding darkens my mind:
What is to be my fate?
I'd left the nest far behind,
Would my wings bear my weight?
The fear within my heart
Is shared by others too,
Each of them at the start,
Each without a clue.
My roving eyes rest upon
The quiet girl beside me:
More frightened and forlorn
Than I could ever be.
We're close enough to share the air,
Yet with an ocean in between:
The gleam of oil on her hair,
On mine, a shampooed sheen;
I hail from a land of fat purses
And she, from a verdant one;
Lives in alien universes,
Beneath the same sky and sun.
I feel ashamed; apologetic
Of my well-fed body;
Hers is lean and athletic-
Her clothes make mine look bawdy.
All differences disappear
As my eyes meet hers,
In them, I see the thrill, the fear,
The same tumultuous universe.
And then, to my utmost surprise,
She flashes me a grin,
As if she too, saw in my eyes
The same turmoil within.
A shaft of light; of strength: it streams
Through our kindered minds,
United in our secret hopes;
In a smile that binds.
wow..this is such an amazing poem. The insight its got and the description of every detail...its so beautiful...love it.
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Thank you for checking this out! I am honoured!
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